Hi, Nicole! I have really enjoyed what I've seen of your portfolio so far! First off, your layout is very clean and easy to navigate, which I appreciated! I like how simple it is. It definitely keeps the focus on your stories.
The story that I read was "The Becoming." I really liked your title. It immediately sucked me in and made me want to find out what the story was really about. The story itself was fascinating, yet so tragic! As I read it, I just kept thinking about how awful of a fate it would be to actually be stuck in that form. It would feel so overwhelmingly devastating. I like that you added that the form had seen so much throughout history. The lady that brought the form to the palace was also so kind! It was nice to see such kindness. I think you’ve done a really great job so far!
RE: Nicole, I have never heard of the movie: The First Wives Club but it does sound hilarious. I wonder if they did base it off the story in Margaret’s Heptameron. I will have to check the movie out. I am glad that you have enjoyed both my stories. It has been a lot of fun writing them. Thanks for the helpful comments.
Hi, Nicole! I have really enjoyed what I've seen of your portfolio so far! First off, your layout is very clean and easy to navigate, which I appreciated! I like how simple it is. It definitely keeps the focus on your stories.
ReplyDeleteThe story that I read was "The Becoming." I really liked your title. It immediately sucked me in and made me want to find out what the story was really about. The story itself was fascinating, yet so tragic! As I read it, I just kept thinking about how awful of a fate it would be to actually be stuck in that form. It would feel so overwhelmingly devastating. I like that you added that the form had seen so much throughout history. The lady that brought the form to the palace was also so kind! It was nice to see such kindness. I think you’ve done a really great job so far!
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ReplyDeleteNicole, I have never heard of the movie: The First Wives Club but it does sound hilarious. I wonder if they did base it off the story in Margaret’s Heptameron. I will have to check the movie out. I am glad that you have enjoyed both my stories. It has been a lot of fun writing them. Thanks for the helpful comments.